Avenue Primary – Beach Adventure

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Aiza has pulled out all her best writing techniques in this adventure story! She’s done a terrific job of describing the characters and setting, made good use of a range of punctuation and built suspense for the reader. Well done!
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  1. cparlane (United Kingdom) on said:

    We really liked the way you used alliteration to describe the coins. Your use of onomatopoeia was also really effective, great story!

  2. Wow, you have really used your “tool-kit” effectively, Aiza. Well done on a stunning piece of writing!

    • poplar (United Kingdom) on said:

      Well done you have made the reader what to read on and on it is the best of all of them well done

      • poplar (United Kingdom) on said:

        Well done you have made the reader won’t to read on on well done ellie louise johnson