Cluedo character descriptions!

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Oscar has created a fantastic character description for Professor Plum-his group’s character for our Cluedo unit. I really like how he gave his character different coloured eyes- it makes him seem very creepy!

Oscar character description

This is Tommy’s character description of Mrs. Peacock. I think his use of adjectives and verbs make this a very powerful piece of work-well done!

Tommy character description

Saima wrote this fab character description of Professor Plum. I really love how much her reader can infer from the clues she has given them-well done Saima, keep up the good work!

Saima character description

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  1. on said:

    great job Oscar! I love the character description! you have a bright light in front of you!:)

  2. LauraK378 (United Kingdom) on said:

    These are all super character descriptions! Saima, I really liked your description of Professor Plum having a ‘traumatised expression’ and how his ‘eyes are drops of distress’. Well done everybody!

  3. FourOaks (United Kingdom) on said:

    That was a brilliant description of Mr Plum ,Saima
    I really am so eager to play Cluedo now.
    I’m really with description but that work is wonderful.

    Simrun from Four Oaks Primary School.

  4. ZRidgway (United Kingdom) on said:

    All 3 of you have written fantastic descriptions! I’m so proud.

  5. khadija1985 (United Arab Emirates) on said:

    Oscar, well done !

    What fantastic decriptions writing for this character, I really like how you
    organize your writing in separate paragraphs.

    Keep going Oscar ..

  6. on said:

    Oscar and Tommy your work is amazing keep it up!!

  7. Tommy and Oscar did an amazing job, it was well structured and it was written beautifully. Well done!!

  8. SarahVugler (United Kingdom) on said:

    Fantastic decriptions here guys. I particularly like Saima’s use of the phrase ‘drops of distress’ to describe Professor Plum’s eyes. What great writing talents you are! Keep it up!

  9. IBurton (United Kingdom) on said:

    Very effective language choices Saima, I particularly like the way you describe Professor Plum as ‘Bumbling meekly into the grand dining room…..’ A high quality piece of writing, thank you for sharing!

  10. IBurton (United Kingdom) on said:

    Wow what an opening Tommy! I love your language choices they really bring your character alive – an impressive piece of writing!

  11. IBurton (United Kingdom) on said:

    Great choice of eye colour Oscar! You have obviously thought about your character carefully and made some great vocabulary choices!

  12. AnnaLMYL (United Kingdom) on said:

    Wow! What brilliant writing! Oscar, Tommy and Saima, you should all be very proud!

  13. SamPalmer (United Kingdom) on said:

    Wow! Such a good use of vocabulary – I’m impressed.

  14. groveroad on said:

    Cracking Cluedo descriptions from all of you! A very good idea and a very good selection of work!