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  1. This is really creative Baraah. I really enjoyed it and I hope you carry on writing. I think you should include longer sentences and more complex words. Love, your best friend Tailah xx

  2. MrAAli (United Kingdom) on said:

    Excellent read, I loved the way you maintained the ‘American’ element in your writing. Well done!

  3. Fabulous writing, Baraah. You create a convincing voice by using appropriate expression and great use of humour- well done!

  4. IBurton (United Kingdom) on said:

    Very entertaining diary entries Baraah. It made me cringe when you describe the reunion with ‘wet, sloppy, slimy kisses’ something I always dreaded as a child! A great piece of writing, well done!

  5. I absolutely love this! I think it will be inspirational to the many younger children who use the site and enjoy the Diary of a Wimpy Kid, while showing them what can be achieved. thank you for sharing this Baraah and congratulations on being a published author!