LMYL Day, Trannack Community Primary, Year 1, 2, 3

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This class did so much writing this afternoon that, often, Charlie couldn’t believe his eyes. At the end of the session, they each described a wolf in such frightening detail that readers must be warned … you may not be able to sleep tonight …

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  1. MsMcBlain (United Kingdom) on said:

    Well done Year 1,2,3. This wolf sounds terrifing! I can’t believe how fantastic your descriptions are, I could almost feel the breath of the wolf over my shoulder as I read your work!

  2. AWhiteley (United Kingdom) on said:

    You guys are so talented! What gripping writing, well done everyone! :-)

  3. GregLMYL (United Kingdom) on said:

    WOW! I wouldn’t want to meet any of your wolves!! I am so impressed with the amount, quality and sheer brilliance of your writing, especially as you are all so young!! Keep up the great work please.

  4. mrblower on said:

    Wow, what brilliant writing!

    I was really scared when I read some of these descriptions.

    Keep up the great writing.

    Deputy Headteacher

  5. These are stunning! I can’t believe the age of some of these authors. What an incredible achievement! Congratulations to all of you. Your teachers must be extremely proud.

  6. Absolutely sensational writing from the Year 1s, 2s and 3s from Trannack! I couldn’t believe some of the adjectives and adverbs this class came up with – they were so good! Well done!
    Charlie Carroll, Author