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  1. CatShim (United Kingdom) on said:

    This is great Pip – lovely and descriptive. I had to read it all the way to the end :)

  2. AnnaLMYL (United Kingdom) on said:

    You are such a talented writer Pip! I really enjoyed reading your work :-)

  3. Wow! This is an amazing, descriptive and an ispiration for all! I sets a clear image in my head as I read further. This story really hooks you in. Well done, Pip! Keep up the good work.

  4. MrLiteracy (United Kingdom) on said:

    What an amazing piece of writing, Pip. I thoroughly enjoyed reading it!