Seaside report

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Oliver wrote a brilliant introduction for his non-chronological seaside report. He has drawn the reader in by using a rhetorical question. DSCF3771

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  1. I really like how you separated the sub-titles. I know so much more about the beach now!
    Emily G7
    SUIS Pudong
    Shanghai China

  2. Coxy04 (United Kingdom) on said:

    Thank you for sharing your work. We loved your question for us, we really wanted to keep reading your report. You engaged all of my class with your work.

  3. asouthall (United Kingdom) on said:

    Such a lovely piece of writing about the beach! I love your use of rhetorical questions aswell, well done!

  4. fmulligan (United Kingdom) on said:

    Oliver this is a lovely non chronological report about the seaside.

  5. IBurton (United Kingdom) on said:

    A great non chronological report Oliver, I love the way you have used a question in your introduction to draw the reader in, it really made me want to read on!

  6. The first question in your writing hooked me in! I had to read the rest and it was fabtastic. Well done Oliver – keep it up.

  7. AnnaLMYL (United Kingdom) on said:

    I love learning about the beach! Thank you so much for your brilliant seaside report Oliver :-)