Spooky Setting Description, by Paddy

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Paddy has been working extremely hard at using better vocabulary in his writing and he has definitely achieved it in this piece. He has used a range of adjectives and powerful verbs to make this attic sound extra spooky. I wouldn’t like to step inside it! You should be really proud of yourself Paddy. Keep it up! Miss Smith.

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  1. Excellent work, Paddy. I write spooky stuff as well and was very impressed by your descriptions!

  2. highgate on said:

    I was really spooked by this description – amazing work, Paddy!