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  1. mistersmith (United Kingdom) on said:

    Lorimer, I like to see a sustained piece of writing like this, you have really worked hard on your story.You are lucky that your teacher gives you lots of time to develop your work. You clearly have a vivid imagination, keep sharing it with us.
    Mr Smith
    Hartshead J & I
    West Yorkshire

    PS I for one am glad that the Titans aren’t around any more!

  2. groveroad on said:

    Wow Lorimer, you have produced some very special imaginative writing – be proud!