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  1. That is such a good piece of writing,Katie ! Why did you type your work ? Why not write it out in your own hand writing next time . I’m sure your writing is very neat !

  2. hfwhiteley (United Kingdom) on said:

    I love your use of alliteration to describe the ‘rusty red bike’. This is a creative story Katie, with some lovely vocabulary.

  3. Thank you for all the comments this will give me more confidence for writing a other story.But I also hope it inspires people .

  4. A brilliant story, Katie – I could picture the bike in the tree perfectly!
    Charlie Carroll, Author

  5. What a gripping tale, Katie – very imaginative! I am glad the teenager recovered!